The Duchess’s Ultimate Surrender – Extended Epilogue

“Francis, no running,” Rachael warned.
Francis laughed and turned to Edmund. “But Sebastian and I want to play around.”
Edmund laughed and said, “You can play with Sebastian without running.”
Francis nodded and proceeded to walk into the house. Hermione giggled and followed after Francis. Rachael wanted to call out to her, but was stopped by Edmund. “Let her be. You know how she always wants to be with Francis.”
Rachael sighed. “I want her to be by my side.”
Edmund chuckled and kissed her chastely. “Let her be, my love.”
It had been four years since Hermione was born, but Rachael still felt as though it were yesterday. She found it difficult to let Hermione out of her sight. But Edmund kept reminding her that Hermione was only growing, like every normal person.
It had been four years since Rachael had married, and her life had never been better. Her decision to be wed Edmund was the best decision of her life.
Rachael pouted and slipped her hand into Edmund’s as they walked into the house. The butler bowed.
“Welcome, My Lord. Welcome, My Lady. The Marquess and the Marchioness shall be with you shortly.”
Rachael and Edmund had come to visit Emma and Lord Henry at the Blackmoor Estate in Brighton, as they often did when the season came to an end. This was usually quite a festive season in Brighton, as balls and events piled up. And for this reason, Emma and Lord Henry often prepared chambers for guests who wished to visit and attend the forthcoming balls.
As Rachael and Edmund walked into the drawing room, they were stunned to see that they were not the only ones there. There were a few other people who were seated and had been served tea.
Edmund and Rachael inclined their heads in greeting before they both took their seats. No sooner had they taken their seats than had Emma walked in, smiling. Rachael rose and embraced her dear friend. Edmund rose as well.
“I am so pleased to see you both. Although I had not been expecting you until tomorrow,” Emma said.
Rachael shrugged. “We left quite early. We were uncertain about the weather. ”
Emma nodded. “Oh yes. My cousin by marriage, Robert Baldwin also complained about the weather. ”
Rachael sighed. “Well, it is a good thing that we decided to arrive earlier then.”
Emma laughed. “It indeed is.”
“Where is his Lordship?” Edmund asked.
Emma looked behind her casually. “He has some business to tend to. He should be here soon.”
Edmund nodded.
Emma turned to Rachael after that, as though she recalled something exciting. “I saw Hermione and Francis. How the children have grown! Hermione is going to grow into a beautiful woman.”
Edmund chuckled. “She will look just like Rachael. Beautiful and radiant.”
Rachael blushed. Four years and Edmund still teased her as though they were newlyweds
Rachael was about to ask about Sebastian before her conversation with Emma was interrupted. A tall man with blonde hair walked up to them. He smiled at Emma. “Lady Blackmoor.”
Emma grinned. “Lord Baldwin. Goodness, I was just speaking about you. About your experience with the weather. ”
He nodded and looked ahead. “Indeed. Terrible. The rain did not stop for days.”
Emma nodded. “Exactly what I was informing my dear friend here… Excuse my manners. Lord Baldwin, this is my dear friend, Lady Blackheart. And this is Lord Blackheart. Lady and Lord Blackeart, this is my cousin by marriage, Lord Robert Baldwin,”
Lord Baldwin stretched his hand shook Edmund’s firmly. “I am pleased to make your acq—”
His greeting, Rachael observed, was cut off by the sound of a lady’s laughter, which rang out in the room, loud and sweet. Lord Baldwin froze before gradually turning around. Rachael followed his line of sight to a lady dressed in red dress with dark hair that framed her face and sharp blue eyes. Rachael watched as Lord Baldwin’s lips parted. The lady he was staring at was in a conversation with another lady. But her cheeks reddened. Rachael smiled. The lady was aware of his stare.
“Who is she, Lady Blackmoor?” Lord Baldwin said. His voice was husky as he spoke.
Rachael knew that look. From that look, Rachael could tell that he was enchanted.
“Lady Bella Hampton,” Emma said. Then a maid came to her and whispered. Emma looked at everyone. “Excuse me. I shall return quickly.”
Rachael nodded. Edmund nodded as well. “Go on, it is no problem at all.”
Rachael focused her gaze on Lord Baldwin as soon as Emma was gone.
“Lady Bella Hampton,” he repeated.
“Excuse me,” Lord Baldwin said. He then made his way over to the lady in red. Rachael smiled as she watched him. Love was beautiful. And she did not know why, but she hoped that it worked out between Lord Baldwin and Lady Bella.
Edmund slipped his hand into hers to call her attention. “Your mind seems very far away.”
Rachael giggled. “Not far from you.”
Edmund caressed her hand. “Never.”
They shared a smile, a knowing smile that held promises of a lifetime.
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Great story
Thank you dear Christine for your comment!
Story fine.But giggles really got on my nerves,Not your finest work I’m sorry.
Dear Pauline, thanks for reaching out to me and for your honest feedback!
An enjoyable read about having a second chance at love.
Thank you, dear Kate! I am glad you enjoyed it!
Loved the story but there was a few mistakes one especially where you said Edmund when it should have been Francis.
Dear Crystal, thanks for your comment! I will make sure to pass this on to my editing team! I am glad that you liked this story!
The cover picture shows Edmonds right hand but readers know right away that he lost his right hand. This seems to be an oversight on your part. I liked the story and you have done well talking about his disability and his feelings of inadequacy. His struggle to overcome his own fee!ings and find love as well as Rachels quest for peace and love is what the book is all about. Somehow the giggles did not seem like the Rachel I pictured. Overall though it was a good story and I enjoyed it.
Dear Madhu, thanks for your comment! I am happy that you enjoyed this story. I will take your feedback into consideration!
A sweet story with a lot to unpack. I enjoyed Edmond’s story of coming to realize his worth. I wondered though at the abrupt end to his story. There were many references to all the terrible things that would happen if his identity was revealed; I had hoped to know more. Looking forward to your next.
Thanks, dear Lisa for your honest feedback.
I am sorry if you felt that the ending was abrupt! Your comments help me to become a better writer. 🙂
What a great story. Truly enjoyed reading this book. What a struggle both characters had to get through. So happy to see all of them unite into a happy family. Great read. Also enjoyed the Extended Epilogue. Would like to have found out what happened to Edmund’s younger brother.
Dear Ann, thanks for your comment! I am glad that you enjoyed my story! 🙂
I enjoyed the story. I love how things were overcome for both Rachel and Edmund. I do feel like there should have been some clarification on what happened to Edmund’s younger brother. I also feel that more should have been brought out about what Edmund had to do to get back his name.
Dear Mary, thank you so much for your comment! I am sorry that you felt this ending needed more info. I will make sure not to make the same mistake again in the future!
Such a wonderful story of rekindled love and overcoming adversity! Thank you.
Thank you dear Ann for your comment!
I enjoyed the storyline and characters. To have lost your true love and reunited by “fate” is remarkable.
Thank you so much dear Kalona!
Great book – could have gone any number of ways – good ending. I
Thank you so much dear Beverly!
Good read for a winter afternoon. Would have liked if it ended with a hint of Theo.
Thank you dear Stacey for your comment!
I really enjoyed this book ,I wish there would have been more on the Theo.
I’m so happy, dear Judy, that you liked the story! Thank you for letting me know!
I always feel so good after reading your stories…one of my top authors now.
Thank you so much for your sweet comment, dear Linda! It’s an honor to be included on the list with your top authors! <3
This is an excellent book. Shows how you can overcome hardships even personal injuries
Thank you so much for your kind comment, dear Celi! I’m glad you enjoyed my novel. 🙂
An excellent story that I thoroughly enjoyed
I’m really glad you enjoyed my story, dear Keri! 🙂
Enjoyable story that kept me guessing. However, there were a few sentences with incorrect words. They extended epilogue stated that Hermione was 4yrs old and that Edmond and Rachael had been married 4 yrs. That timeline doesn’t work as Rachael was married for a time when she found out she was pregnant, a pregnancy is 9 mos, so they had to be married closer to 5 yrs, not 4 yrs (if Hermione is 4 years old).
Thank you for your helpful comment, dear Debbie! I will keep this detail into consideration and try to be more consistent in my upcoming work!🙂
A little different. Man was strong and weak as was he women! Maybe stronger than he. You need better proof reading especially at the end the wrong person was referred to as another!
Thank you so much for your helpful feedback, dear Debra! I will take your comment into consideration and try to improve my editing process!🙂
Enjoyed the story with its twist and turns. Always good to have a happy ending although I would have liked for the missing brother to have been found.
Thank you so much for your supportive and helpful feedback, dear Sylvia! I’m very glad that you overall enjoyed my story!💕
I enjoyed this book very much but thought I would get some information regarding Edmund’s brother and if he was ever found. I also would have liked for you to go into more detail of what it took for Edmund to assume is own identity and the steps he had to go through in order to do so. I your other books and their epilogues, the epilogue just seemed like a conclusion for the entire story. I was just a little disappointed in this epilogue, but will continue to be one of your devoted readers.
Thank you for your helpful feedback, dear Melodie! I will take your comment into consideration, and I hope that you will enjoy more the epilogue in my other novels!🙂
Good read. Plots and twists left you wanting more.
Thank you so much for your positive review, dear Karen! I’m truly grateful for your kind words! ❤️
Nice story but had an abrupt extended epilogue ending. Could this be a lead into another story concerning the missing brother? What consequences did Edmund face with revealing his true identity? Left you wanting to read more.
Thank you for your comment, my dear! I’m glad it left you wanting more, all I can say for now is stay tuned…
Rachael and Edmund were fated to be together but things got in the way. Finally they are part of a family with Francis and Hermione. Love won out.
Thank you, Gail! Ah, isn’t it great when love conquers all?
A very nice read ….
But, using the word ‘giggles’ so frequently is not my cup of tea.
Children giggling is acceptable but definitely not adults.
In your short Epilogue you used:
Hermoine giggled!
Rachel giggled!
I do like your stories alot.
Hello my dear Rosalind, I am so glad you enjoyed the story! Thank you for your feedback, I will make sure to have that in mind for future novels!
I liked this book because it followed the story of Emma and Rachel.
Hello my dear Fran, I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed it! Can’t wait for you to see the stories to come!
Loved the story didn’t mind the giggles nice that they were happy. One can be happy and strong at the same time. I to noticed the mistake on the cover As well as Emma children in first book were two girls. In this book was one boy
My dear Christie, I am so glad you enjoyed the story! ✨ It’s so true that strength and happiness can go hand in hand, and I think Emma and the Duke really showed that balance throughout their journey. My apologies for the mix-up with the cover and Emma’s children, that’s definitely an interesting catch! Sometimes little details like that slip through the cracks, but I hope it doesn’t take away from the overall enjoyment of the story 🩷