Abducted by a Fiery Lady – Extended Epilogue

Emilia sat on the terrace, a sleepy contentment filling her body. It was two months since she and Luke had moved together into the countryside, and she had a surprise for Luke. He was in Town, dealing with some business, but he was due to return home this afternoon.
“Cousin?” Hestony’s voice called her from the door onto the terrace. “Can I have a word with you?”
Emilia nodded. “Of course. Do come and join me. I’m so sleepy in this heat,” she added, fanning herself with an ostrich-feather fan, a peculiar device Luke had purchased in Leicester Square on one of his trips.
Hestony frowned at her as she sat down beside Emilia. “Cousin, I’ve received a letter. I have no idea as to its origin. I only know I was afraid when I read it.”
Emilia was instantly alert, all drowsiness forgotten. “Let me see it.”
Hestony opened the small velvet bag she carried and passed it to Emilia. She peered at it, though the hand was surprisingly neat.
I know you act as if you are unaware of my existence, the letter read. But I am perfectly aware of yours. And do not hesitate to believe that I will do all that is in my power to bring about an end to the current state of affairs. I know where Henry Ellington lives and I will take action as I see fit.
Emilia shivered. She read the letter again and passed it back to Hestony.
“When did this arrive?” she asked.
Hestony’s clear blue eyes regarded her nervously. “Yesterday. I was out riding and Mama was in the house, having a rest. She said Mr. Lewes found it.”
“Mr. Lewes gave no account of the person who delivered it?” Emilia demanded.
Hestony shook her head. “He said he found it on the front step.”
Emilia swallowed hard. “I don’t want to cause alarm, but perhaps Hal should know of this?”
“I was too afraid to tell him,” Hestony admitted. “Mayhap, Luke can take word to him?”
Emilia was already pushing back her chair. “Yes. Of course. We could go there together – all three of us, if you would prefer it?”
“I had hoped Luke could go without me,” Hestony said shyly. “You see…I don’t want to cause trouble for Hal. He might be vexed.”
“Hestony!” Emilia patted her hand, concerned. “No! Don’t even think that. Why should you believe yourself as a cause for trouble?”
“I don’t know,” she mumbled. Emilia had her doubts – something about Hestony seemed guarded, as if she wasn’t telling the whole truth. But time would tell. She wasn’t about to press her cousin for truths she couldn’t share.
“Very well. When Luke gets back from London, mayhap he can go straight over to the estate and warn Hal. Would you like him to see the letter?”
“I don’t know.”
Emilia squeezed her cousin’s small, cold hand. “I understand,” she said gently. “Whatever you feel to be best. But Hal needs to know.”
“Yes. He does.”
They sat silently for a while. Emilia looked out over the view. The terrace was on the ground floor, but the whole manor was built on a slight rise, so that it was possible to see out over the valley, to the magnificent forests and the distant hills. She smiled to herself. She loved it here. When Luke came back, her heart would be truly content.
“Shall we go in?” she murmured to Hestony. “I have a longing for tea.”
Hestony grinned. “Me too, cousin! And…thank you.”
“It’s nothing. We always help each other,” Emilia said gently.
Hestony squeezed her in a brief hug and the two of them went, arm in arm, into the house.
After tea, Hestony left, having promised her mama that they would go to the fair in the local market town. Emilia leaned back in her seat, feeling the soft chintz cushion at her back and looking out over the hills. From here, the view extended far out across the valley, and she could see the distant forests draped in mist.
“I really am sleepy,” she said to herself, stretching her feet out in front of her. It was something unusual for her, and she was fairly sure it wasn’t the weather alone. The summers in London had seemed more sweltering than this.
“Milady, should we be ready to prepare a late dinner?” the housekeeper wanted to know.
“Yes, thank you.” Emilia nodded. “We discussed a casserole? That way, you can keep it simmering in the oven all day if need be. I shan’t take dinner until Lord Westmore comes home.”
“Yes, milady.”
Emilia waited until her maid had gone and stretched, feeling the sweet, drowsy contentment in every limb. She was glad June was going to move here soon – at least then she would be attended by somebody she knew.
“Luke’s a dear, to know what that would mean to me.”
She smiled to herself. She must have dropped off to sleep, for when she woke, it was to silence, and she wondered what had woken her. She sat up, hearing hoof-beats on the path.
“Luke!”
She shot up and pulled the bell, then ran to the mirror in a flurry, combing out the ringlets that framed her face and adjusting her gown.
She was on the front step as Luke came up the stairs. He saw her and grinned. “Emilia!” he called, his eyes bright like a small boy’s. “There you are!”
He ran to her and they embraced on the top step in a gesture of familiarity that was entirely out-of-keeping with strict propriety, yet to them, was as natural as breathing. She felt his lips descend on hers and a joy such as she had never imagined spread through her body.
“You’re back! I’m so happy.”
“So am I,” Luke agreed, resting his hands on hers.
Arm in arm, they went back into the house.
“Milord, dinner is in the dining-room,” the housekeeper said as they walked past her. Luke’s brow raised and Emilia grinned.
“You waited for me?” Luke wanted to know. Emilia laughed.
“Oh, Luke! I’m not going to let you starve.”
Luke chuckled and kissed her. Emilia’s heart soared, as together, for the first time in a week, they sat down to dinner.
“I’m so glad to be back,” Luke said after the second course was set aside. “Emilia, I miss you every time I have to go away. If I could move my wretched account to Yorkshire, I would do it in a flash.”
Emilia chuckled. “I understand. But it is only a week. I do miss you, too.”
“Well, maybe we can send somebody else in future. At least, I wish we could. I know it’s only a few times in a year, but…even a night away from you is hard.”
“For me, too.”
Luke stood and came to join her on her side of the table. She leaned over and kissed him and his arms went around her. Together, they went out to the terrace.
“Luke,” Emilia whispered as they stood, leaning on the stone wall around the terrace together. “I have something I want to tell you.”
“You do?” Luke’s eyes clouded with worry. “What is it, sweetling? Has aught happened, while I’ve been gone?”
Emilia smiled. “Not while you’ve been gone, no,” she said cryptically. Luke frowned.
“What? Did you hear news from London? Is it your father, perhaps? Or…”
Emilia shook her head. “It’s not bad news, Luke. It’s…special news.”
“Oh?” He frowned. “Tell me?”
She leaned in, to whisper in his ear. “I am with child.”
“No!” Luke had the most comical look on his face, eyes wide open, jaw dropped. “Emilia? You are? But…”
Emilia chuckled. “It’s perfectly natural, Luke,” she assured him. “After all, it’s how all people started in the world.”
Luke grinned from ear to ear. “I know. But…But…Emilia! This is…our child. My child. Your child. I just…I don’t know…I can’t believe it!”
Emilia was laughing now, her whole body suffused with sweet enjoyment. “Oh, Luke,” she said. “I can’t imagine why you’re so surprised, but it is rather dear. I love you, Luke. I really, truly do.”
Luke kissed her, looking into her eyes. “Oh, Emilia,” he whispered. “I love you, too. With all my heart and soul, with every breath.”
She wrapped her arms around him and knew that, whatever happened, her life was on a brighter road now, and anything untoward would be only a tiny bump that the two of them could navigate together. The country of the heart is a bright land and nothing is really all that frightening when your hand is held by the one you love.
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Enjoyed this book very much. Don’t know why the extended epilogue didn’t explain more about Osbourne and Hal after alluding to them and the darkness that Osbourne is surrounded by.
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Loved the story. It got off to a slow start but became really engrossed as it went on. Now I can’t wait to see Hestonys story
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Nice story. I liked your characters. I thought Emilia cried way to much. Luke seemed to shy. The story had a slow pace.
Thanks for sharing your story.
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I enjoyed the story, there were a numnber of conflicting facts but overall it moved pretty quickly. In the Extended dialogue, I don’t understand why Hestony and her mother were at their country residence or why Hal’s estate would be close by since he supposedly was a long way from his father’s estate when he became ill.
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Beautiful story. Loved it. Lots of insecurities with the main characters, but that is how real life is. Very well written. Love the romance and the adventure. Wondering what happened to the nasty duke. Really don’t want him to get away unscathed. Hope we hear more about him and how he will repay his debt. Can’t wait for the next book. Please keep me in mind.
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Interesting twist to have Luke kidnapped by way of an introduction. For a woman who is supposed to be strong and rather gutsy, Emilia certainly cried a lot. In fact, father and Luke also were rather weepy. I was left hanging when her father went to see the dirty Duke, she went after him and the Duke intimated something, never did hear about what happened..he either should have still been there when Emilia arrived, locked up in a room or tied to a tree…something but that piece was left hanging. Somehow, he got home as we later discover. Osbourne appears from nowhere. I found it somewhat odd that Canmure was talked about at one point as if he was some different character. I’m not trying to be overly critical but there were a few oddities in an otherwise sweet story that just seemed odd. Thank you for letting us read your tale.
I agree with your points. Rework a few points and the rest will fall into place. Drop some of that crying!
I agree with Kim and Mary. Great story line with Emilia kidnapping Luke. Get rid of some of the crying. What happened to her father when he went to see the dirty Duke who then kidnapped Emilia? In the epilogue you hint at trouble for Hestony and Hal – that doesn’t seem to fit with an epilogue.
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Love the storyline. It is refreshing to see the lady be the one kidnapping him. Light hearted read. In chapter 2 you said the room he was put in was in the attic with no furniture. I was confused on how furniture appeared and it ended up being the study. Also, some editing required. Grammar and incomplete sentences.
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I agree with you 100%
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Loved the start of the storyline but it seemed disjointed in parts. Especially where it was an attic then changed and the part where the father was kept somewhere by the duke who then magically appeared at home no explanation. There is too much crying tears from all the characters especially as the title is abducted by a fiery lady if she is so strong and fiery she wouldn’t cry at every event. Not sure I would purchase if there was a second book in series. Need to sort out proof reader as they should have picked up errors in storyline.
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I love the story and the tales they were up to. I adore the strong heroine in a book, and she is very strong.
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I enjoyed the storyline, especially with the lady doing the kidnapping. However, as pointed out in numerous comments above, book needs better editing. I think I will stop reading extended epilogues as they just leave me hanging. I guess this is the reason authors do this–so readers will be eager to buy the next book.
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I was kind of disappointed, there was so much crying in the story, including the men. I didn’t feel the characters were very strong. It was a good story line but I felt it could have been better.
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I agree with Crystal ,to much crying including the men.It made them look weak.I felt it could have been better.
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Wonderful!!
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Wish it would have kept going but it was an intriguing book of despair and love
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I normally don’t read this type of story. I’m addicted to medieval stories so while I was on the hunt for another book to read I came across this and said give it a try. At first I wasn’t so sure I liked it but I’m one of those people who reads a book to the end because you never know how it will end. I must say I was surprised at how good this book is and recommend it as a very enjoyable story. It wasn’t a waist of time. I look forward to reading other books by this author. Although after reading some of the comments from other readers I must agree with them on a few points such as the crying, turns of events and last but not least the word tummy was used. It seems an unlikely term to use in an adult book all that aside I still enjoyed it.
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I loved this book and epilogue! I enjoy reading and this is one of the best books I have read in a long time!
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Well I have to agree with Mary. How do you go from a bare room to a furnished study with a fireplace and carpet? And there were deffinently grammarical errors. But overall it was a great story.
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I loved it!!! I couldn’t put it down. I absolutely loved their story, and can’t wait for the next book!
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Needs a lot of proofreading and attention to continuity. Good story though.
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Good story but I agree with other comments regarding the attic and what happened to her father when he saw the duke. Also she is talking to duke then all of a sudden she is in the carriage being whisked out of London but she has no idea how she got there and neither does the reader. The other thing that had me a little confused is I thought her dad couldn’t pay his bills because the duke owed him money and other times it seemed like he owed the duke money seemed to go back and forth who owed who yet when the duke left area because of the prince it said he probably owed a lot of people money. I thought it was kind of confusing. I didn’t like all the crying either. If you ever rewrite the story maybe you could make some clarifications. Also I know there is a sequel but this book did not seem to have an ending
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I liked that Emilia’s character constantly took the initiative to take action to solve the issue with the duke instead of waiting for her father, even though she didn’t think about potential consequences. Also, it was refreshing that Emilia & Luke’s attraction was based initially on their emotional connection rather than just a physical one.
I’m looking forward to a Hal & Hestony story.
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On the whole I enjoyed this story line It was a nice twist with the lady kidnapping the gentleman and then finding love However I do agree with other readers about Emillia who was written as a “strong” woman in the story she certainly did do a lot of crying. The extended epilogue was a bit incomplete. It only told us about Lukes and Emillias happy news but not about the threat to Hal. Also What happened to the dirty duke ? When he rode off was that his end or is he still a threat to the happy couple. Will all of this be in the next book ?
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Is there a second book
I have to agree with Mary about the furniture and some grammar.
Loved the story
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The story was good but a lot of errors in the story. Needs better editing/proof reading. I still hope there is a sequel.
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I got a little confused and lost in the story. It jumped around to different topics. What’s with all the tears. Most men wouldn’t show that much emotion.
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Sweet story. I liked it. Seems like you got a
lot of picky reviews. In the epilogue though, Hestony didn’t need to be mentioned. Seems like the beginning of another story.
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Emilia and Luke are so sweet and they love each other. Who knew they would become a family when she abducted him in error.
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Needs proofreading and attention to continuity.
Good story though.
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Good story
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