Tamed by a Dangerous Lady – Extended Epilogue

 
The big parlor at Westmore House was lit with torchlight. Laughter spilled down the length of it, and Raphaella looked down the vast space, feeling uneasy.

Lady Westmore laughed somewhere at the center of the room, her pale hair bright in the lamplight, her face warmed by a smile. Raphaella saw that, and felt reassured. Lady Westmore and her husband were good friends of her family.

At least, she thought nervously, there is somebody I know.

Visits to Westmore House with her brother, Canmure, were always awkward for her, though she had never actually told her brother that before. Sweet-tempered, loving Canmure would have been upset, and might even have canceled them utterly, which would have meant hardly ever seeing his best friend.

We are so rarely in the countryside.

She and her brother had attended London Seasons every year since the death of their parents, when they were teenagers. They now spent almost all their time there, living in their amply-appointed townhouse. It was, she thought uncomfortably, much nicer than the ramshackle estate in the countryside.

She smoothed a hand down her dress – a floaty muslin gown in the latest fashion. It was a little showy for the more modest country fashions, a fact which made her feel even more self-conscious than otherwise. Her red curls were highlighted by the darker color of the fabric, and she thought her full bust showed a little too much at the neck.

She looked around, blinking her dark eyes, searching for familiar faces. She spotted a dark-haired lady she knew, though she thought instantly how changed she was. Raymonde Hunsford, the heiress to Maverly!

She felt joy as she noticed how Raymonde looked so at peace. She had her hair in an uncomplicated style, the dress she wore was simpler than the ones she’d favored in London. But her cheek was red-toned and her eyes sparkled and she seemed lit from inside.

She noticed a man appear briefly in the room, his arm cradling a sleeping infant. He talked briefly with Raymonde, took her hand lovingly, then left.

“That’s Lady Raymonde,” a lady informed her. “She married the Earl of Alford last year. Now, there’s a story!”

“I don’t really wish to hear it,” Raphaella said softly, though she did it with a smile. “I was never much of a one for talking about people. Tell me about that beautiful purse, instead. Where did you get it?”

The lady – perhaps five years younger than herself – blushed furiously and looked at her toes. “Thank you,” she said, smiling up at her. “I bought it in London, at the famous seamstress’s shop.”

“Oh! I know the one,” Raphaella smiled tenderly at the younger lady. “I live not far down from the place. Is it in Bond Street? Tatley’s, yes?”

“Yes! That’s it!” The lady nodded. She looked pleased. “I love their work! Though, it’s dreadfully expensive…I begged Mama to let me get just something from them, so I could be in style…”

“There’s no style like good taste,” Raymonde reminded her gently. “And, since you picked such a lovely bag to go with that dress, you have plenty of that.”

The lady blushed even deeper, and Raymonde tactfully turned the conversation to something neutral. As the girl wondered away in search of tea, looking clearly more confident than she had when Raphaella first started talking to her, she noticed Lady Westmore drifting across the floor towards her. She bobbed a curtsey and smiled.

“Emilia!” she greeted her, kissing her cheek as she took her hand. “How lovely to see you!”

“And to see you,” Emilia nodded. “How are you? It’s been ages since you and Canmure came down for a visit.”

“It has,” Raphaella agreed, tucking a stray curl of red hair behind her ear. She felt her own full lips stretch in a big smile, just seeing Emilia – she had always been very fond of her.

“Luke will be so pleased to see him,” Emilia agreed. “Where is your brother, by the way?” She scanned the hall, blue eyes gazing about searchingly.

“He’s outside, taking a walk through the gardens,” Raphaella said, smiling warmly at the thought of her brother. “He said he wanted to check if Luke has made any improvements to the place.”

Emilia laughed. “Luke is always adding things here and there,” she agreed. “If I left him to it, the place would be turned to Kew Gardens. I have to remind him that we need to maintain the house as well!” She grinned and Raphaella chuckled in warm agreement.

She listened as Emilia shared the latest news, along with information about her child, now three years old. Raphaella felt her heart melt – she had always loved children. She was twenty-five now, and she worried that she might never have any. All the suitors she met had disinterested her so far, though she would have found it impossible to envy Emilia her joy.

“And Luke seems to have raised another one as interested in gardening as he is,” Emilia was chuckling. “The two of them are always wandering around in the grounds together, smelling leaves and picking flowers. I declare! We might as well throw caution to the winds and turn the whole place into a botanical garden now.”

“Why not?” Raphaella giggled. “The best one outside London!”

“Indeed!” Emilia agreed. “But, don’t tell Luke that…he’ll do it. Just tell me he won’t.”

Raphaella laughed, and just as she was about to reply, she was interrupted by Luke arriving, a grin on his slim, lively face. He greeted his wife lovingly, resting a hand on her arm, and then turned to Raphaella, bowing low.

“Lady Raphaella,” he greeted her respectfully. “How lovely! How are you?”

“Very well, thank you.” She smiled up at him, bobbing her knees in a polite gesture. She was about to mention the whereabouts of her brother, when she almost stopped breathing.

“Luke,” the tall, dark-haired gentleman with the gaunt, handsome face said. “Might you introduce me to your acquaintances?”

“Logan!” Luke grinned. “Of course. Lady Raphaella, may I present Lord Inverly, a good friend. It seems hard to believe you two never met.” He turned to the handsome man. “Logan, this is Lady Raphaella, a dear friend and sister of Lord Canmure. Are you sure you never got introduced?”

Raphaella bent at the knee, dropping a slight curtsey. She felt her heart thudding and she felt almost sure it was loud enough to be heard. She noticed that the gentleman was not looking at Luke, or paying attention. His gaze – dark and smoldering – was focused on her.

“Pleased to meet you,” she whispered. “Lord Inverly,” she added.

“You’re certain you didn’t meet?” Luke said, looking at Logan with a strange, slightly confused expression on his face.

“I am certain,” Lord Inverly replied, turning to Luke. “I would have remembered a lady as beautiful Lady Raphaella.”

Raphaella felt her cheeks flush with heat, and she raised her dark eyes to Lord Inverly’s face. He turned back to her at once, with a smile.

“My Lord,” she said, finding her voice. “You are not often in the countryside?”

“No,” he said, grinning again. He was shier than she had thought, she realized as he turned to her again, his eyes somewhat hesitant, his smile also. “I don’t come nearly often-enough. My solicitor and steward keep me busy in London. Perdition take them!” He grinned.

“You like the country, then?” Raphaella asked, smiling at him.

“Oh, yes!” Lord Inverly nodded. “I love the country – it’s free out here. One can stretch one’s legs, and take real rides. And, up here, the world is so beautiful!”

“You like the Downs?” she asked, referring to the Yorkshire Downs, the rolling, beautiful countryside.

“I do, yes!” He grinned. “There’s nothing more beautiful, to my mind. I feel free, here.”

“Yes.” Raphaella nodded, feeling a tingle in her own heart. She had never thought to meet somebody who thought about Yorkshire exactly the same way she did! She had fallen in love with it on the first visit, an impression which had lasted ever since.

“It seems we share some views, then,” he said, lifting a glass of cordial in salute.

“Yes,” Raphaella agreed. She had never felt like this before – never felt so instantly close to somebody, like she could talk to him for hours and they would only find more to talk about, not less.

When she looked up again, she noticed Luke and Emilia had moved, and also that Canmure had come back into the room. He was looking over at them with an anger she’d never known that he felt.

She shivered, and hoped that he did not disapprove of Lord Inverly. That would be very upsetting.

“We do seem to share many views, My Lord,” she agreed, taking a sip of her own glass of cordial. It was blackcurrant, a favorite of hers.

“Yes,” he repeated, smiling. “We do.”

She glanced back across the room, and was relieved to notice that Canmure had gone.

She put her glass down, feeling a mix of relief and worry. She wished she knew what was bothering Canmure. She also hoped, more than anything, that she would see Lord Inverly again, and soon.


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  • Great read.But the Extended Epilogue not much about Raymonde and Cutler.But the next book to come I presume

  • Loved this story! It was filled with so much suspense about Cutler’s family and his insecurities stemming from his bad childhood. I loved that he fell in love with Romonde and she him and how they helped each other with their issues and came to love each other. I did not like the extended epilogue as it really led into it seemed like another story. This was a really good story!

  • I was disappointed in the extra
    Epilogue. It had very little to do with the main couple in the book.

  • The story of Raymonde and Cutler was nice but I would have liked to read more about them in the extended epilogue

  • The extended epilogue did not seem to be for the same book. It is nice to set the reader up for the next book but not at the expense of tying up the book the extended epilogue is for.
    I enjoyed Raymonde and Culver’s story but the setting of the earldom and the dukedom should have been addressed in the extended epilogue. The ending left a sour taste.

    • Thank you so much for your constructive feedback dear! From what I gather, I may have overshadowed the novel’s protagonists in the EE… I’m glad you managed to enjoy Raymonde&Cutler’s story nonetheless 🙂

  • It was good, but I felt the chemistry was lacking between Cutler and Raymonde,and the storyline was a bit on the boring side.. The extended epilogue was disappointing…

    • Hi Raeesa and thank you so much for the constructive feedback, it’s truly appreciated!
      Stay safe 💞

  • I love the book but I also agree with a lot of the reviews. The extended epilogue had nothing to do with this particular story. I was hoping to at least find out what the sex of the baby was😒

    • Thank you so much for your honest feedback my dear!
      I will definitely consider your comment in my future writing 🙂

  • I loved the story from beginning to end. The reviews agree with my feelings about the extended epilogue – it doesn’t fit with the story of Raymonde and Luke.

  • Hi, I very much agree with the other opinions here included. I was hoping to know more about how Raymond’s and Cutler’s life together developed and grew, since we left them just when they were free from all the obstacles that had harmed Cutler so deeply, and could now start enjoying their own life; it sort of ended in an almost abrupt way.
    Thank you for the otherwise unusual and trapping story!

    • Hi there my dear Silvia and thank you so much for your comment!

      I truly appreciate the honest feedback and I’ll make sure to consider this concern in my future novels 🙂

  • I enjoyed the story but feel the title is wholly misleading. There is nothing dangerous about Raymonde and Cutler needs no taming. Hes fairly mild, at times seems weak but does manage to shine when he needs to. Agreed that the extended epilogue seems wholly unrelated. I suspect there will be more of Raymonde and Cutler in the actual book.

    • Thank you so much for your honest and valuable feedback my dear Kim!
      I’ve noted these issues and will make sure to avoid them in my future novels.
      Stay tuned! 🙏🏼

  • I enjoyed the story of Raymonde and Cutler very much it was a bit different from the norm. The extended epilogue was very disappointing

  • What was I reading in the Extended Epilogue? I thought I had the wrong Epilogue til I scanned down & saw Raymonde’s name, at least! I am disappointed in not reading about them & the baby’s gender & more of how they overcame all their trials! I am frustrated as I have never not had a Extended Epilogue be totally about the players in the book! I hope we get to have an EXTENDED, EXTENDED EPILOQUE ASAP.
    Thank you.

    • Hi there my dear Diane,

      I totally understand your frustration about the extended epilogue – I’ve received a lot of valuable comments on this issue and I promise to avoid this mistake in my future novels.

      Stay tuned! 💞

  • I was confused at the start of reading as no one was dangerous. Raymond’s or Cutler. The uncle, sure. It, the story got better as you went along but lacked plausibility. Then the extended version wasn’t even about them and more of what happened with their lives.
    The first book was really good!! The Mischievous Duke!

    • Thank you very much for your valuable feedback dear! I’ll make sure to consider these points in my future work 🙂

    • Thanks so much for sharing your honest opinion my dear Charlotte. 💞
      I’ve received a lot of comments regarding the extended epilogue and I’ll make sure to avoid the same issue in my future novels.

      So stay tuned for more! 😉

  • I enjoyed the story of Raymonde and Cutler. It kept my interest throughout. I was disappointed that Raymonde didn’t confide in Cutler about her past. It kind of got overlooked and she kept it to herself. I felt Cutler looked weak and timid sometimes and Raymonde looked the strong one, but their love seemed real…. I also was disappointed with the Extended Epilogue. Would have been nice to see into their married life a little.

    • Thank you so much for your valuable feedback my dear Ann. I’ve taken note of the extended epilogue issue as to avoid it in my future novels!

      Glad to know that you still enjoyed Raymonde&Cutler’s story 💞

  • I loved the love story of Cutler and Raymonde! I’m dissatisfied with the extended epilogue. I would have loved a wrap up of this book before starting on another book.

  • The story was good ,I liked the way it works out.I’m wondering the.sex of the baby the ee didn’t give me any information about how their lives turned out . I’m left wondering what happened to them. Was something else that I missed in the story. How did these other people get in the ee? Do confused about the ending.

  • This was a most disappointing extended epilogue . It had very little to do with the book and seems to have wandered in by mistake from another book. Moreover, the title of the book is misleading: the heroine is far from dangerous and the hero is a flawed character who appears to lack initiative. Thirdly, the Downs are in Surrey and Sussex, the south of England. Yorkshire has Dales. You need to do a bit more research, I’m afraid!

  • Story is magnificent. What a stunning plot and characters. You kept me on my toes the entire time. Looks like there is another story coming up and am very interested in it.
    I would have love to learn more about Cutler and Raymond and their child.

  • Good plot but a few things didn’t quite add up. Could have sworn I read Cutler’s dad was a duke he should have automatically been the heir not something his uncle could take away once he became of age. Cutler although being a soldier of rank and hero saving lives he was kind of weak in his character seemed afraid of everything Also people seemed to black out before being shot at like someone hit them over the head. Last but not least the EE. Really had nothing to do with the book we just finished reading. Didn’t even let us know if the baby was a girl or boy. I do look forward to reading next book though

    • Thank you so much for the constructive feedback my dear Mary!

      I hope you like the next one better, stay tuned 💖

  • I checked twice to make certain I was reading the extended epilogue for the correct novel – it made no sense at all – I was left “hanging” at the end of the novel, expecting the extended epilogue to add a sense of completion of life in the short or long term. If you wish to write a “teaser” for an upcoming novel, then perhaps do it in addition to a more traditional “extended epilogue” – a win/win perhaps? a satisfied reader looking eagerly forward to beginning the next novel?

    • Thank you so much for your valuable and constructive feedback, my dear Carol. I’ll try my best to avoid making the same mistake in my future work 🙂

    • Thank you for your valuable feedback, dear. I’ve promised myself never to make the same mistake again!

  • I agree with other readers that stated they missed having more of Raymonde and Culver in the EE. It was however, also a refreshing change from the typical EE pattern. I think it sets the next book up quite nicely.

  • I did expect to read about Raymonde and Cutler….BUT I am intrigued about the new couple of interest!!! Please release the sequel soon!!

    • My Dear Vanetta, thank you for reading my novel! For sure, I will take into consideration your interest for a sequel 😉 Stay tuned!

  • This extended epilogue was mostly about everyone else but the main characters. It’s like the introduction to a new book. Very disappointed. No mention of if the sleeping child was a boy or girl. All about other people.

    • Thank you so much for your valuable and honest feedback, my dear Bambie. I’ll try my best to avoid making the same mistake in my future work 🙂

    • Dear Bambie, thank you so much for your note.
      I’ve received a lot of comments regarding the extended epilogue and I’ll make sure to avoid the same issue in my future novels!

  • I totally with Jo Q.
    You should also give the name of the next book so we don’t have to go hunting thru amazon. What a pain when trying to read in order.

    • My dear Nanaclem, thank you for your honest feedback! Actually, Raphaella & Logan’s is the next story I will publish! Be a little more patient and soon you will read it 🙂

  • I enjoyed reading Cutler and Raymonde’s story. Considering he was a war hero Raymonde appeared The stronger of The two of them. The extended epilogue was disappointing though. It did not complete their story fully The gender of their child.was not mentioned It did however give an insight to the next book.

    • Thank you Nora for your honest feedback. I am glad you enjoyed this story. I will keep in mind your note about the extended epilogue!

  • Some interesting twists.However,The phone letter at the end Was so obviously a trap That it was a little disappointing.In general it was a fun read!

    • Thank you so much for your helpful feedback, dear Debra! I will take your comment into consideration, and I hope that my other books won’t disappoint you!🙂

    • Thank you for your comment, dear Emma! I hope that my extended epilogue gave you a satisfying answer about their future!🙂

  • Raymonde and Cutler made a good team when they were thwarting his uncle and the steward and getting back what was rightfully theirs.

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