The Marchioness’ Buried Secret – Extended Epilogue

 

Grace ran across the courtyard, her dress making sounds on the grass as she moved. She seemed excited to be outside. Emma noted that Grace loved the sun. She liked when the day was bright, so she could play in the garden. She was the exact opposite of her elder sister, Ana. Ana liked to stay indoors and read books. She liked to be left alone. And when she wanted to speak, she would speak on all the books she had ever read. Poetry was her favorite.

Sally placed a tray on the table, while Greta and Veronica, nursemaids to Grace and Ana respectively, stood close to each child.

“Careful, Gracie…so you do not fall,” Emma said as Grace giggled and picked flowers from the garden. She walked over and took a seat, while she watched Grace. Ana was also seated, her eyes watching Grace’s every move. Despite the fact that Ana was different from Grace, Emma admired that she looked out for her.

Ana smiled when Grace walked over and took a seat, clapping her hands and giggling. After all that had happened a few years ago, Emma was so grateful for her children, and for Brighton. Brighton was a new home, it was light, it was hope. She was happy that Ana and Grace would never have to live under fear. She was happy that her family was happy.

Her father had come down to Brighton twice, to see her and his grandchildren. And he often kept in touch, sending letters and sometimes, gifts. Mr. Anders also reached out as well. He had never come down to visit, but he did send greetings from time to time. Although Emma always remembered Henry’s father, it did not hurt so much to do so anymore. The pain was long gone, and she had only memories. Memories that caused no pain. The happiness her family had given her made it possible for her to overcome all of that.

The nursemaid, Greta, who had been following Grace around came beside Emma and curtsied. “My Lady, may I take the children in to have lunch?”

Emma nodded. “Of course. Of course.”

She kissed both their foreheads before they walked inside the house with the nursemaids.

“Darling.” Emma heard as she closed her eyes to sip her tea. She placed it down when she saw Henry walking towards her, grinning.

Emma giggled. Even after all these years, he still made her laugh. He still made her smile so much. He still made her blush. Henry was perfect for her. Even after all these years, he still treated her like she was fragile.

He kissed her forehead when he approached her. Then, he proceeded to take a seat beside her.

“How was your day?” she asked.

“Splendid,” Henry nodded. “Splendid.”

“Did the business deal go through?”

He took her hand in his and nodded. “Better than I expected.”

She smiled in satisfaction.

Henry relaxed in the seat, smiling. The cool breeze swept past them, and the sun dimmed a tad. Emma squinted her eyes and looked up.

Henry sighed. “Perhaps it would rain today?”

Emma shook her head. “I hope it does not. Rachael is arriving today.”

Henry’s eyes widened. “Of course.”

Emma nodded. “I can’t wait to see her.”

“As I.”

As they sat outside, talking and laughing, Emma could not help but wonder how everything had worked out so well for her. Henry squeezed her hand and she knew that everything she got, she deserved. She loved Henry with all her heart, and she never regretted that their paths crossed at all. Meanwhile, she would wait for her old friend to arrive. She had missed Rachael a lot.

 

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Lady Rachael Allen, Duchess of Loringham, was who she had been. But now, Rachael was unaware of the woman who was seated now seated in the carriage. A woman in her late twenties, a wife to no one, stripped of her title, but favoured by the King. She knew that they had been praised for giving up the traitors, but she still felt ashamed, for having lived with Loftus all those years, and pretending that everything was alright, when nothing was.

She had been so afraid of what he would do to her, so all she had done was obey him. And now, even as she was finally free, she still felt that he was watching her somehow, waiting for her to betray him. She had a habit of looking over her shoulders nearly every passing minute. Even his death did not make her feel any safer.

She had been caged. At the beginning of their marriage, she had indeed loved him. She was mesmerized by him, by his ways and by the ease in which he carried himself and by the fact that he had acted as though he cared for her. But he had not. Everything changed when she had miscarried their first child, and from there on, she was unable to bear another. They had tried a few times, until Loftus got tired of trying, and rendered her useless.

The carriage hit a bump, and Rachael snapped out of her reverie. She wondered now, what she was going to do with her life. Although she was heading to Brighton, to stay with Emma Blackmoor in her new home, she still felt out of place. They had welcomed her with open arms, and were awaiting her arrival, but the awareness that they cared for her, did not ease her pain, or fill the void she felt inside.

The carriage hit another bump, and this time, it wheeled to a halt. Rachael sighed. She wondered what the problem was this time. Suddenly, she heard noises outside. There was a loud scream, and then, a struggle. Rachael’s heartbeat increased. She looked around her, but the curtains prevented her from seeing the outside. But she was curious, so she made to raise the curtain of the carriage, but the door was pulled open and she was dragged out. Her red hair flew around her face as she tumbled out of the carriage, falling to the ground.

She looked up, frightened. All she saw were two men, in black clothing, their faces were covered with black cloth as well, so all she saw was their eyes.

“Who are you?!” she screamed. “What do you want?”

But she was ignored. One of the men who stood above her brought a black cloth, like the one on their faces, and moved towards her. She moved back, screaming. Behind him, she saw her coachman, his hands were tied, and he was stuck by the carriage. His screams were muffled by what they had tied around his mouth.

Just as Rachael made to run, one of the men gripped her arms, and the other placed the black cloth around her mouth. She screamed and shook her head, her screams were now muffled. She however, kept struggling, until the black cloth covered her eyes as well. All she saw was darkness, as she was taken away.


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  • I really enjoyed the story and all of its characters and concepts. I would be remiss if I didn’t say that whoever edits for you is letting you down though, because I’m afraid that you are going to receive negative comments because of it. Otherwise, I had a difficult time putting it down from the time I started it yesterday evening to when I finally made myself go to sleep and picked it right back up this morning. ♥️

  • Was confusing at first, with Henry being a Marques then was to inherit an Earldom..

    Henry was a weak character but I loved the relationship between him and Emma..

  • It was a great story, I loved how everything was so secretive and hard to tell what was going to happen, I was disappointed in the many errors that there was in the wording and spacing of the words.

  • I enjoyed the book. It was a quick read. There was some grammatical errors, but otherwise a good story.

  • I loved this book how can ones father be such a blackgard I really felt for Emma and Henry but there love prevailed I certainly hope there’s a book with take Rachel’s story.

  • Really agree with the above comments. Story was very good, just distracting with all the grammar errors & spacing issues. Some of the errors were even wrong words placed in the sentence, so then the sentence did not make sense for the paragraph.

    • I agree with Susan. Loved the story but also distracted by all the errors. I don’t know how a book, if proof-read could come out so badly mangled.

      • Thank you for posting your honest opinion, my dear Kathleen.

        I always take your feedback to heart 💖

  • Great new story from start to finish. And the extended chapter ,looks like your next book will be fantastic too.Keep up the great writing.The proof reader needs to do a better job though.As quite a few grammar errors.

    • Thank you for your positive feedback, as well as for flagging up the proofreading issue, my dear Pauline!

  • Enjoyed the book and most of the epilogue. I would have preferred it to have been the start of a book regarding Rachael rather than part of the epilogue.

  • I enjoyed this book very much but found at least 20 errors ( misspelled words, run-on words, words left out, and grammatically incorrect sentences.). Please have another proofreader take a look at this book, it is too good for it to be published with so many errors. I agree with one of your other readers in that I would have liked to know if They became the Earl and Countess or lost it because of the father’s actions. I will be pleased to recommend this novel for you!

    • Thank you so much for your valuable feedback, dear!

      I’ll definitely consider your recommendations 💓

    • Thank you so much for your comment, my dear Helen! I’m honored to know you’ve enjoyed reading my novel 🙂

      Stay tuned to find out 😉

  • I liked the story line and enjoyed the love story despite the need for many editorial corrections needed. Hopefully once corrected it will be easier to read. Keep up the interesting stories ,especially Rachaels to come!

  • Wonderful story!! I loved reading about Henry and Emma. Now I’m looking forward to finding out more about Rachel’s story. I will highly recommend this story to my friends!!

    • Thank you so much for your positive comment, my dear Jen! I’m so happy to know that you’ve enjoyed Emma and Henry’s tale 💞

  • I enjoyed this book very much. The characters were interesting and it was easy to dislike Henry’s father

    • Thank you so much for your comment, my dear Arlene! I’m glad to know you’ve enjoyed reading my book 💖

    • Thank you for your comment, my dear Kay. 💓

      I guess all I can say for now is.. stay tuned! 😉

  • I enjoyed the book very much; but, you need a good proofreader you have misspelled words, wrong words, not words, and Words that run together along with extra words. You write well and it flows along on a good place. I would recommend your books

  • I have to agree with the previous reviewer. There are many grammatical errors, poor syntax, and wrong verb tenses and non words. The story was interesting, but again with a better proof reader it would have been better. There were instances where there was a redundant amount of words. The story could have been made to flow through rather than dragging at times. All in all a good story but I’m sure it would benefit you to have a new proofer.

  • Good story, and I enjoyed it. I agree with Kay. You need a better proofreader, and punctuation needs to be corrected. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the book. Can’t wait for the next installment about Lady Allen!

  • OK, I’ve read some of the reviews so I’m not going to harp o. Any errors. I know my spell check and quick comments sometime look like gibberish, so my head just did the
    corrections and kept going. That said I will scream at you!!! Extended Epilogues are spose to complete the story!!! Kidnapping Lady Allen And a period us ohhhhhh so crewl!!! Please reassure us we find out what happens!!! Keep writing, errors and all!! Loved it even wanting to plant a face on the Duke’s. 🙄

  • This was a good story, I love both main characters. There love felt real and their story was very enjoyable. I could not put the book down. Keep up the good job

  • I must agree with Kay. I liked the book but the wording was awkward at times and it should have been proofread. I would like to apply for the job! I read approximately 200 books a year, of many different genres, and really like your books. I’m looking forward to the next one! Contact me, please 😊

    • Dear Eunice, thank you for reading my book and for your comment! Your opinion is much important to me! Unfortunately, at this moment I do not need a proofreader. In case I will, I will contact you 🙂

  • I love this book. Fantastic plot and story line. The suspense was so great, I could not put it down. Love how the story flowed. I feel for Henry, especially how his father treated him. Just wondering if he lost his title and their home. Looking forward to Rachael’s story. Can’t wait.

  • What is the name of the book that tells Rachel Allen’s story…? The one you started in the extended epilogue of The Marinchoness buried secret?

  • Apart from the many errors of grammar, spelling and punctuation, there were factual errors as well. There was no King of France during the period when the book was set! The Emperor was Napoleon! You really must try to learn a little history before embarking on a historical novel! This book is utter trash!

    • Hello dear Margaret,
      Thank you for reading my book. I am sorry that you found it full of errors and you didn’t enjoy it. The artistic license gives us the opportunity for a deviation from facts and alteration of the conventions. I am not writing history for sure, but thank you for pointing out those issues to me!

  • Loved this book, looking forward to See what happens to Rachel. Hope her story comes out soon, very intriguing.

  • The errors in the story did not detract from it. I was disappointed with the ending, it did not clarify the titles of Henry and Emma, nor what happened to the Duchy. The extended epilogue also disappoints. It seemed more as a preview to a future book then a true epilogue.

  • I enjoyed reading this book. It was well written, had a good plot and kept me wanting to read more. Need for better proof reading was evident.

  • I have to agree with many of the other comments. This was a good story somewhat spoilt by the number of errors which should have been spotted by a good proofreader. I flagged up nearly 5 dozen such errors when I read this on my Kindle app and I took the trouble to use the option to report content errors. I hope that my comments are read and acted upon. It did make me feel like beta reader to report content errors, but if they aren’t actually pointed out, they may not be found. I would also comment on Emma’s use of a duvet, which would have been highly unlikely in Regency times.

    • Thank you so much dear Helen for your honest feedback! I will take your comment into consideration and inform my editing team. I am glad that you liked my story!

  • Loved the story, but agree with the proofreading comments. Your story deserves better.

    Can’t wait for Rachel’s story!

    • Thank you, dear Ellen! I am glad you liked the story and I will make sure to pass your comment to my editing team 🙂

  • What happened to Rachel?
    Did Emma and Henry have a son? I so enjoyed reading this book and would love to know what happened later

    • Dear Dawn if you want to know what happens to Rachel you can read the sequel. It’s my latest novel entitled ‘The Duchess Ultimate Surrened’ 🙂

  • I enjoyed the story but would have enjoyed it more if there was not so many errors. You definitely need a better proof reader.

  • I loved the story. The characters were portrayed perfectly. How did Henry’s mother really die? Who killed her? You end a story with a kidnapping? Why? Is there a new book that covers what happens to her? Could u please e-mail me that answers to my questions.

    • Thank you, dear Gail, for your honest feedback and your comment! I’m sorry you felt this story left you hanging. There is a sequel with Rachel’s story and is my novel “The Duchess’ Ultimate Surrender”! I hope you enjoy this one as well!

  • I purchased this box-set of the Wicked Gentlemen’s Club to read each day over the week. However I could not put the three books down for long and finished all three within a day. Thank you for the great reading. I will be reading more of your work. So please keep them coming. I loved each one!!

  • I loved the book Well written and the strangles if the innocent made you to symbathise with them.My English are not maybe so well,it is not my first language but I saw some errors in spelling and grammar.Also ,at first you wrote he was Duke and then he was mentioned as Earl

  • I thought the book held my attention well the story was put together well, had enough mystery in the plot to make you continue wanting to read to find how it ended

  • Enjoyed this story line tremendously! However, please obtain a new Editor. It is like they are in a hurry and do not care about the content. Every book I read from you has words left out or spelled incorrectly or paragraphs are rearranged and do not make sense. If I had purchased it, I would have returned for a refund.

    • Dear Gemma, thank you so much for your honest feedback. I have already changed my editing team! I hope from now on you won’t face this problem with my books. 🙂

  • I think it was a great story and enjoyed it immensely. A few words omitted or misspelled did not change the meaning of sentences and paragraphs. Congratulations on another good book.

    • I’m so glad you enjoyed the book, dear Carl! Your feedback is always much appreciated! Thank you!

  • I think Henry should have been a stronger character but the story was very enjoyable barring a few grammar errors.. you need a better proof reader. I look forward to reading more by you.

    • Thank you, dear Ellen, for your feedback! It always helps me improve! I’m glad you enjoyed the book!

  • I loved the storyline of Henry and Emma, the hardship of the way they had been thrown together by forced circumstances. Even in the face of adversity they found love, hope and trust between each other. As far as errors go I did find them a little frustrating, but was able to overlook due to the flowing storyline. Continue to keep up the good work, look forward to reading some more of your books.

    • Thank you, dear AJ, for your feedback! It’s always valuable to me! I’m so glad you enjoyed the book!

  • Excellent book, full of love and some action. Although I don’t usual like spies and other great danger, this didn’t come until the end. The extended epilogue was great, as I love those and it really set up the next book and I’m looking forward to it.

    • Thank you, dear Keri, for your kind words! I’m so glad you enjoyed the book and so thankful for your support!

  • I loved this story. Whoo, what an emotional rollercoaster! So happy the characters got their HEA. The only issue I see is the need for a better editor. And I cant wait to read Rachael’s story.

    • Thank you so much for your sweet and supportive comment, dear Sandy! I’m really glad that my book made you feel such strong emotions! 🙂

  • I enjoyed the book very much. The text errors are easy to get passt when you are eager to read on and get to know howthe story unfolds.
    Keep up with great story telling.
    Best wishes
    Miriam

    • Thank you so much for your positive and supportive comment, dear Miriam! I will take your comment about the editing errors into consideration for my next books! 🙂

    • Thank you for your feedback, dear Brenda! There is actually a sequel with the character of Rachel and it’s called “The Duchess’s Ultimate Surrender”. I hope you will come to like this story! 🙂

  • Entertaining and suspenseful story. Enjoyed the characters and plot. I look forward to reading Rachel’s story.

    • Thank you so much for your positive feedback, dear! I’m very glad you enjoyed the plot and the characters of my story! 💕

    • Thank you so much for your supportive review, dear Sylvia! I’m very happy to learn you found my story interesting!❤

    • Thank you for your comment, dear Gwen. Truth is, I do like to make my readers wonder until I get to reply to their questions through another story…

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